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Soulmates Or Emotional Weights

Big and Carrie, a romance that carried Passion, desire, hunger and thirst But a bad boy’s love is what hurts the worst For when one craves and gets an inner inch For love that’s wings are clipped and stitched Conditional flight takes root in one’s soul They forget that unconditional love is the most important goal For his kind cannot fill the voids inside her heart Just like an addiction you want to stop after it officially starts And when she finds pure love she does not know how to receive For she is used to this man that always picks up and leaves Soul mates or soul ties that should have been broken For a writer that’s aware has a special token Reflection on pages filled with the mind Could have saved her from going back to Mr. Big in later times. By: sabina soul partners Big and Carrie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/30/2012 8:50:00 AM
Sabina congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/26/2012 3:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sabina! I love your poem and your perception of the relationship! Well-written and insightful...Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 5/25/2012 7:56:00 AM
Nice one Sabina congratulations xx
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Date: 5/25/2012 7:50:00 AM
For a change, a modern day couple to read about .... romance lives on in all decades of time. A great piece you did..congratulations on your win, Sabina !!!
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Date: 5/25/2012 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Soul Partners" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2012 12:30:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Sabina. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2012 9:07:00 PM
nice one, sabina... did you mean " for she is USED to this man?".. otherwise, fine.. kindly recheck..:) huggs!
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Date: 5/20/2012 6:12:00 PM
I never saw the TV show, but love is love. Best of luck in the contest.
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