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Do you know what I really love about you golden honey flows in each step having walked in my words stepping over clouds Even the darkest ones every inch of my soul opening From this heart deep inside out it's pumping only for you knowing the deepest part of me is wishing away with the fairies that I could kiss you on those most gracious lips Right now it would take ones breath away in a silent gasp The whispering of awe stuck jewel living with you such a dream actually gets this mind all fired up deeply in thought Has it been you my love that I have forever dreamed my queen Thinking about you passing you one of the hottest kisses With boiling hugs bubbling inside for you

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Date: 10/26/2014 11:56:00 PM
I agree with Olive. First stanza was truly beautiful... having walked in my words stepping over clouds. You sound like one who likes to encourage and extend your limits :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/27/2014 1:19:00 AM
you are so true timothy wish i could lay it all bare the words are so hard to find for something so perfect wonderful comment pal thank you deeply
Date: 10/15/2014 8:45:00 PM
the first line is captivating.. :)!!! how could one not read succeeding lines.. :)!!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/15/2014 8:58:00 PM
i write how i feel olive dear friend smiling thank you kindly for the wonderful comment bless you
Date: 9/12/2014 1:08:00 PM
It's lovely material beauty, my lovely poet friend. An excellent beauty of sentimental trust. Lovely done. Loved always,bl
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Date: 9/12/2014 5:37:00 AM
A beautiful sentiment; lovely poem, indeed.
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:05:00 PM
This one would light any ladies flame. "Do you know what I really love about you golden honey flows in each step having walked in my words stepping over clouds Even the darkest ones every inch of my soul opening" Opening stanza is pure gold!
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Date: 9/11/2014 4:43:00 PM
A lovely "love" poem, well done ~~
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