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Soul Journey:

May you find peace and happiness within, As the darkness fades your light shall ignite, Your soul unburdened by troubles and sins, For this is your immortal sacred rite. If the Milky Way is the path of souls, Then the stars within it are souls reborn, So let this be your ambition and goal, For when your body is destroyed and worn. Angels of heaven may bring joy to you, But joy is fleeting compared to substance, Demons and evil can fill your head too, Salvation lies in the heart of romance. Within your soul is the key to success, Expecting more, expecting nothing less. /|\ (Ten syllables per line)

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Morgen Farmer

Date: 10/27/2016 10:56:00 PM

Nicely written Rick. Great job. How have you been mate?

White Wolf
Date: 10/27/2016 11:02:00 PM

Good mate, yourself? I've never done so much poetry before until I came to the soup, Haha. I love this environment. It's great to be alive, isn't it! /|\

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/27/2016 7:52:00 PM

Interesting write, Rick. I found the reference to the Milky Way quite intriguing. Never thought of it as the path of souls. The spiritual references in your poem give one food for thought. Thanks for sharing.

White Wolf
Date: 10/27/2016 8:06:00 PM

Yes, there are many hidden truths and meanings in mythology. I'm glad this one was intriguing for you, and thanks Eileen /|\

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/27/2016 12:47:00 PM

Wow! You are really unlocking your latent Bard, eh Rick. Very, very good poem. I feel the music in the words because this poem is so melodic in flow and imagery. Superbly done, my poetic friend. Very well written indeed. Love you always. RW

White Wolf
Date: 10/27/2016 8:01:00 PM

I will read 'your story' in about half an hour RW. Look forward to it, And thanks again for leaving such a moving comment. Your mate Budge /|\

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/27/2016 12:50:00 PM

Btw, in regard to your comments on "Fast Learner." It was another family I was writing about. My father was a auto factory worker in the 60's which was good money back then. We weren't rich, but we had enough. Anywho, read my poem, "Your Story." That clears up a lot about me. Love you, mate.

Sarita Milliner

Date: 10/27/2016 9:03:00 AM

I read your first poem and now I've read another. There's one thing certain and two things sure, you're a great writer, a passionate soul, you leaving your readers thirsting for more! :-)

White Wolf
Date: 10/27/2016 7:58:00 PM

Wow! Thanks Sarita, that's very touching! /|\

Phil Capitano

Date: 10/27/2016 4:10:00 AM

The Milky Way a path of souls... if that doesn't leave you breathless...nice one Rick.

White Wolf
Date: 10/27/2016 4:12:00 AM

Thanks phil, and thanks to mythology too. /|\

Paloma P

Date: 10/27/2016 3:12:00 AM

Very lovely Rick, I need to start following that Milky Way on the way to the heart of romance. :)

White Wolf
Date: 10/27/2016 3:15:00 AM

Haha, nar, stick to poetry, all men are trouble!!! Haha /|\