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Ouch the light it burns But wait is that the gates Am I really here or is this a dream I am standing in line for judgment Now its my turn I smile and think Well I know I will make it God turns to me and says Sorry you can not come in You dont believe so I cant let you in Goodbye my child I tried but it is just to late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/3/2013 11:06:00 PM
deep & cool.........SKAT
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Date: 5/8/2013 4:21:00 PM
Cara, you will not be turned away...I don't believe in hell... However I believe we all go to heaven, unless we break the 10 commandments... you seem to be sweet... and if you ever need a poet friend here I am... glad it was only a nightmare... always~ LINDA
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