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Sorceress Sibyl Simmers

Prophetic powers draw dark eyes toward opportunity hidden in ball of fire predicting future. Sibyl speaks. Boldly foretells her lift over the threshold and willfully conjures a hunk of burning love. Graceful, posing hands present a strikingly handsome face uplifted—scrutinizing the love of his life. Caryl Ramsdale Copyright © 2011 All rights reserved. Dodoitsu Poetry Form September 6, 2011 "CRYSTAL BALL" poetry contest sponsored by Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. ~ 1st Place ~ 9/18/2011

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Date: 9/20/2011 4:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win...Sara
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Date: 9/20/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:09:00 AM
amazing angle for the theme, caryl...heartfelt congrats on your award winning treasure… top of the heap!.. huggs!
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Date: 9/19/2011 1:29:00 PM
Caryl, Great to see your worthy poem at the top. Great to see a first place win for you. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/19/2011 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Caryl
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/19/2011 8:57:00 AM
Thank You! CR
Date: 9/19/2011 3:21:00 AM
Caryl congrats on your well deserved win..David
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/19/2011 8:57:00 AM
Thanks David! CR
Date: 9/19/2011 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Caryl. Well deserved.
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/19/2011 8:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Bob! CR
Date: 9/18/2011 11:33:00 PM
congratulations on your win! :)
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/19/2011 8:59:00 AM
Dinda, Thank you! CR
Date: 9/18/2011 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations and good luck with the hunk!! Save some for me! Lee
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/19/2011 8:59:00 AM
Hi Lee, Thank you! CR
Date: 9/18/2011 9:12:00 PM
CONGRATS CARYL ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH THIS INTRIGUING POETRY LUV..
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/19/2011 8:56:00 AM
Linda-Marie: I’m thrilled to have received a place of honor in your enchanting "CRYSTAL BALL" poetry contest. Thank you! Competitions created by you always seem so alluring that I’ve noticed the poets/poetesses do their best to enter early to race for the placement finish. Wishing you a delightful time judging your new contest "BELL, BOOK AND CANDLE". CR
Date: 9/7/2011 1:30:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Good luck in Linda-Marie's contest...Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest.Sara
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/8/2011 6:16:00 PM
Thanks Judy! CR
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/8/2011 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Sara! CR
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/8/2011 12:07:00 PM
Very nice my friend. A winner for sure. Good luck God Bless, JB
Date: 9/6/2011 5:50:00 PM
Love this one - a sure winner, my friend
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/8/2011 6:14:00 PM
This poem was a fun write for me. Almost Halloweenish...lol Thanks! CR
Date: 9/6/2011 9:53:00 AM
hey Caryl very good and very clever.. love it good luck, might withdraw mine and have a rethink, ha ha ..David
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/6/2011 10:10:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by David. Have another creative day filled with blessings. CR
Date: 9/6/2011 9:53:00 AM
thanks for stopping by and commenting..this one of yours looks top-notch..good wishes , jag
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/6/2011 10:06:00 AM
Thanks always appreciate your coments my friend. CR

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