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....soon the rain will fall skittles on my tongue the garbage I will let sit video game and popcorn ....soon my mother will call i will hold my tongue the garbage will be out a healthy meal .....soon, but not today 4 weeks more, till her vacation **Phil E

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Date: 6/22/2010 3:12:00 PM
this is a strong write. then that day should no longer be just a pass by. should be fixed, in time. awesome write. much emotion. hope ur having fun Baby Boy!! ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:24:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Boy. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2010 8:19:00 AM
Powerful poem- about holding on to your home?
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