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Soon ,The Trip To Follow

12-13-2011 Soon,the Trip to Follows Soon- as I too ,will follow -The swarm of warm colored butterflies fluttering, As if waiting for a break from the cool Spring rain, Their wings moving as if in rhythm, They wave as I walk into their core ,no movement can be sudden-only still, The path where we are at,is one less followed,no other footprints,only mine shallow ,As the last of the dew- drops from my nose, flutters my heart and the mass of beauty, Flys onward with a whispering silence,leaving as if drawn towards the sun- Like the many flowers reaching for the blue in the sky, I found the evening cool and braved to relax, Morning's glare reveals the glittering crystals settle into the white sand, An early heavy swirling wind cause the trees of the valley to bend, Where as one Step begins and the other comes to an end. Only tomorrow will show,what more is in store,soon to follow..

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Date: 12/19/2015 9:05:00 AM
I enjoyed this winning piece!
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Date: 12/18/2015 11:18:00 PM
Great take with this lovely poem Ricky.. Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/18/2015 3:52:00 PM
Really liked this one Ricky, you are pushing into the spirit of writing in this I feel, congrats on the place achieved.'
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Date: 12/18/2015 8:26:00 AM
This is a lovely piece, Ricky. Well done. regards, Viv
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Date: 12/18/2015 1:54:00 AM
Ricky, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA
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Date: 12/17/2015 7:34:00 PM
RICKY, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT
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