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Song In the Night

A quiet night like this Has its twin stilled Yet echoes in my heart A siren song Notes find their way to yours Till flesh is filled With urgent steps for home For each we long!
Kim Patrice Nunez 20 August 2015 Visual of a Verso Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 9/24/2015 2:43:00 PM
I was looking for a poem of yours to comment to, but found this older one that I never congratulated for its win. I had really liked it annd am glad it did well in the contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/5/2015 7:48:00 AM
Beautiful, Kim! Your work is always so moving. You are a true poet, my Dear. xoxo
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Date: 9/1/2015 11:44:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:07:00 PM
This is beautiful, Kim; I can feel the emotional tone and a romantic vein flowing through these lines. ~ Congrats on this worthy win! Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/30/2015 10:37:00 PM
Very wonderful verse Kim! Congrats on awesome win!
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Date: 8/30/2015 6:12:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/29/2015 10:23:00 PM
I loved yours from the beginning, Kim. BIG congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/25/2015 3:13:00 AM
Missing someone in a very conducive relaxed atmosphere. It is not enough to acknowledge what you feel but being in control of what you desire will make it happen right before your eyes. 7 (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 8/24/2015 12:45:00 AM
You penned this a great with vivid imagery. It is beautiful and excellence...... Stay blessed KIM.........LIGHT.............A.M.
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Date: 8/23/2015 7:11:00 PM
Awesome verse! You've really created a vivid picture with so few words. "With urgent steps for home For each we long!" Love it! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/22/2015 5:30:00 AM
Marvelously enchanting, dear Kim. A seven
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Date: 8/21/2015 3:52:00 PM
wow, this is a beauty! I just love seeing all the entries in this contest of Nette's!
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Date: 8/21/2015 9:11:00 AM
Kim this is so Beautiful. Deep and full of emotion. This should do great in the contest 7x
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:04:00 AM
Short, deep, romantic and GREAT! Smooth too. Great poem, A7
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Date: 8/20/2015 12:10:00 PM
Dear Kim, awesome and adorable write....very nicely complimenting the picture....good luck :-).......love, Anu:-)
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:40:00 AM
You manage to capture a sate of being and wrestle it to the paper before is vanishes from your sphere of recognition. Emile.
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:17:00 AM
Excellent.....simply excellent......
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Date: 8/20/2015 10:45:00 AM
I sense a longing for your love to come to you. Fresh imagery Kim...good luck and as John says WoW...lol
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Date: 8/20/2015 10:19:00 AM
sounds of the purest Love....a thing so seldom heard of....echo softly through your words....I am glad I did observe....;)
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Date: 8/20/2015 8:28:00 AM
so so beautiful Kim good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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Kp Nunez
Date: 8/20/2015 8:37:00 AM
:-))) I was at your house! Seems we were commenting on each other's poems at the same time. Thanks a lot, Jan! hugs!
Date: 8/20/2015 8:11:00 AM
Oh well done, this was longing and beautiful..
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Kp Nunez
Date: 8/20/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, once again, Cas! hugs!

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