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Somewhere Inbetween

People love the boldness of Bryan Adams. Or elsewhere seek the sweetness of Taylor. Who would listen to my voice? That lingers somewhere in between. They die to acquire Gates´wealth. And pity on the people of Somalia. Who would appreciate my fortune? That lingers somewhere in between. The toppers were awarded. The failures were criticized. Nobody noticed my mark, That lingers somewhere in between. People gasp at a coitus. They take flirts and crushes yet so lightly. Who would talk of my love? That lingers somewhere in between.

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Augustus Black

Date: 9/18/2016 12:22:00 PM

This is a good poem in my view, telling some facts about the world. Nice job.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2016 11:56:00 PM

Naeeta, ,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/16/2016 9:06:00 AM

Neeta, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 9/16/2016 6:03:00 AM

Mature thinking, understanding what it is to be between possibility and reality. Your poem recognizes some truths, Neeta. It's what poetry is about, really, to observe the world around us and to see deeper, further, than most people can. Your poem is poignant. Keep writing! And welcome to poetry soup, a site that has helped many poets develop their skills. It's also a great site to connect to other poets.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/16/2016 2:01:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love