Somewhere

Somewhere At the edge of vision through the thinning veil in the shrinking moonlight amid sleeping’s blinks I awaken somewhere. John G. Lawless SOMEWHERE – Poetry contest 1/10/2015 Syllable count – 6 5 6 5 6 - 28

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 10:16:00 PM

you are welcome..PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/15/2015 1:57:00 AM

Well crafted write John! Congrats on fine win!

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:16:00 PM

Thank you Dr Sharma.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2015 12:49:00 AM

this is REALLY good. Glad to finally be seeing it on the winner's list. Congratulations.

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:17:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, always nice to hear from you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2015 9:31:00 PM

John, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:18:00 PM

Thanks Linda

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/14/2015 3:34:00 PM

Boy I really like this one John. I am surprised it did not rank higher. Congratulations on your win.

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:19:00 PM

Thanks "Maurice" -- I knew it would wind up "Somewhere"....hehehehehe

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/14/2015 10:20:00 AM

Enjoyed it. Congrats. Love

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:19:00 PM

thanks Rajat.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/13/2015 10:39:00 PM

A mysterious, dreamy somewhere to enjoy. Congrats on your win, John! Hugs, Rhonda

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:21:00 PM

Thanks Rhonda, we used to call them "daydreams" and be chastised for dilly dallying.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/13/2015 9:47:00 PM

A nice one to be somewhere, congrats on the win, John

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:21:00 PM

Thanks Dr. Mehta.

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/13/2015 5:47:00 PM

I still like it, and back to grats your win, well done my friend. :)

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:22:00 PM

Thank you two times Casarah, always nice to hear from you

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/13/2015 5:31:00 PM

Congrats on the win John...huggs

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:22:00 PM

Thank you.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/13/2015 3:10:00 PM

Hi John, I like the image of your "somewhere." Congratulations on your win. Sandra

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Sandra for reading and commenting.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/13/2015 2:50:00 PM

Wonderful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/13/2015 1:05:00 PM

nicely done John,congratulations on your win

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:23:00 PM

Thanks Robert

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/10/2015 10:38:00 AM

very visually stimulating! nice write!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/10/2015 9:12:00 AM

another brand new day,,,Like this a lot John

John Lawless
Date: 1/15/2015 6:26:00 PM

Thanks Harry for stopping by to comment