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Somethings Disease

I will break into your thoughts, with what is written within my heart... I'm so sick, infected with where I live. Let me live without this, ...emptiness ...selfishness I'm so sick! All my complaints diminish to nothing, I am ashamed of my somethings! Thanks for the comfort, ...only because I suffer! I'm so sick...

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Date: 2/20/2016 9:52:00 PM
I can feel the sickness pouring off the page
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/21/2016 3:53:00 AM
s I felt it pouring out the pen
Date: 1/25/2016 7:19:00 PM
Isn't some of this from the song "I'm So Sick" by Flyleaf? Other than that, nice job adding to it
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/25/2016 9:46:00 PM
Wow I hope not! I do kind of remember hearing that group a lot 5, 6 years ago? Hmmmm...anyways thanks for reading!
Date: 1/13/2016 7:23:00 PM
Brian, it makes me sad to know, this is reality... thank you for sharing. SKAT
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/16/2016 12:21:00 AM
Me too

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