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Something Not To Try

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Something Not To Try

Thoughtless nights,
they come and go
leaving my spirits
forever low
The darkness now plagues
my inner mind
and traps my heart
into a thick spellbind.

I warn you now
to all who read
not to follow in my sad deed
I gave my soul
I gave it whole
and prayed she give it back
but it seemed
a sense of reality did this lack
because I look at face 
and I can't find a single space
that has not been left scarred.

You will definitely lose
no matter what you choose
you'll end up like me
no longer happy
and no longer free.

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  1. Date: 3/12/2011 9:50:00 PM
    I think if am not wrong..........u were in love!...But anyways a very good composition indeed!

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 9:55:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Seb. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 7:36:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... check out our contests too..good luck with luv..