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Thoughtless nights, they come and go leaving my spirits forever low The darkness now plagues my inner mind and traps my heart into a thick spellbind. I warn you now to all who read not to follow in my sad deed I gave my soul I gave it whole and prayed she give it back but it seemed a sense of reality did this lack because I look at face and I can't find a single space that has not been left scarred. You will definitely lose no matter what you choose you'll end up like me no longer happy and no longer free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2016 10:46:00 PM
Seb, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:09:00 PM
SEB, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 3/12/2011 9:50:00 PM
I think if am not wrong..........u were in love!...But anyways a very good composition indeed!
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Seb. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2011 7:36:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... check out our contests too..good luck with luv..
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