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As this week closes into hours of pewter night may the moonlight touch your lips while I sleep in the arms of dreams unrefined. Though I may not be with you on misty evenings caved by my pride, but think of me as I send you this whispering sigh of an embrace feathered by the sky... I humble myself in your presence not, but, wait for me to disrobe this façade, while you can, then… Remember days like other days when the roof of blank shades begin to unwrap this cloistered body hidden in a pile of sawdust still reeling like a glistened dragonfly. The light bulbs of time's avenues are streaked with marquees of a name where the lattice of my wishes climb into a garden of your moistened eyes so green. Enter the 100 in a ROW contest #2 Contest Sponsor: PD Linda 7/6/2016

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Date: 7/9/2016 2:06:00 PM
Now this is such a well thought out one. Congrats on your winning, Nette.
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:43:00 AM
congrats on your beautifully written winning poem.
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Date: 7/8/2016 4:03:00 PM
Nette, this is beautifully written. It has a magical, lyrical quality about it. Congrats!
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Date: 7/7/2016 1:36:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
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Date: 5/16/2015 7:30:00 AM
Hi nette: beautiful poeitc phrases . Congratulations!
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Date: 5/4/2015 10:31:00 AM
A fav for me and a 7 Congrad's on Your win! Light & Love
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Date: 5/4/2015 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations my poetic friend, like I said in my earlier reply this poem lingers in the mind
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Date: 5/3/2015 10:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win, this poem is so lovely makes me wish I had a good pickup line ready!!!!
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Date: 5/3/2015 9:32:00 PM
NETTE, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/3/2015 4:22:00 PM
Very nice Nette, congrats!
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:19:00 PM
Beautiful piece,Nette...Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 5/3/2015 9:41:00 AM
Your words flow from the page in a rhythmic current that grabs the reader's attention and gently guides the flow of thoughts through great imagery. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/1/2015 3:18:00 PM
Every so often one reads poetry that makes ones hairs stand on end. This is one of these times Princess, it sure is. This is sheer poetry, hugs//James and to my favs, happy weekend to you :) :)
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Date: 5/1/2015 7:50:00 AM
Beautifully penned imagery; I truly enjoyed this poem. Yep, it's a '7'.
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Date: 4/30/2015 2:30:00 PM
the words from this poem linger in the mind like a fragrant scent that dances with the dreams of longing...my first thought after reading your poem
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Date: 4/30/2015 11:26:00 AM
Wow. Just beautiful ..Life~ I am back from the dead. I am actually a reader not a writer. Now. :-) read more of you later. C ya!
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Date: 4/29/2015 6:06:00 PM
Oh wow, where the lattice of my wishes climb into a garden of your moistened eyes so green...you have such a great way of capturing everything spectacularly, you're writing is so unique and wonderful to read! :)
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:50:00 PM
.... that day will come ..... and you will forever remember it :) - A beautiful gem, dear Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:29:00 PM
Sensual and so romantic dear Nette..A fav
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