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Someday(Was My First Poem Here-And This Is the Recent Version)

Blue cresents pouring down Yellow beams roll around Heavenly whispers enter these ears Screams and cry heard ,we fear We might be thousand miles far But still hear the suicide bomb car Exploding to put millions to death Someday-it will all end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 6:37:00 PM
i really hope we live to see peace,but hope is the next step to fear,and fear is all i have when i watch whts happenning around the world--Someday--love this poem--Charma
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:23:00 AM
ohmigawd 0.0 i love it hugs kisses xoxo i miss you loves brillant poem, i sure hope it ends, and soon!! PS I DIDNT GET INTO HERSHEY
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Date: 8/30/2009 4:16:00 AM
Sajdah this is a very deep and meaningful poem that truly touches on an amazing thing that I just can't grasp a hold of - The faith these people display regardless of how tragic truly amazes me - hopefully it will end and we can all live in some sort of harmony - God Bless, mj
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Date: 8/29/2009 2:24:00 PM
It is sad that someone can hate so much. Interesting thoughts put to pen a a very good way. Keep writing. Sara
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