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Some Days

Some days the words rush in on me And my writing gushes out Like a hydrant wetting children on hot summer day My fire gets put out Some days the words tease me As my writing just trickles out Like the last moments of water in the garden hose Conserving it all for a drought Some days the words gently unfold And my writing slowly pours out Like a pitcher of crisp, clean water Nourishes my body and wets my mouth Some days the words don’t come at all My writing it has no chords My instruments call to me I am lost without a word 8-16-14

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Date: 9/6/2014 5:00:00 PM
Some nicely written verses..... I wrote one with the same title a while back. It didn't turn out nearly as well as yours.... Well done, my friend...... Jake
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:18:00 AM
Thanks Dave- hoping for the rush today. I just love the rush. :-) Christine
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Date: 8/16/2014 4:26:00 PM
I can relate to all these days but thankfully my muse is with me today:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Christine Costello
Date: 8/16/2014 6:40:00 PM
today the gods just brought a trickle to me. :-)Christine

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