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Some Day

we were on that cliff prosed in lovers embrace stars close enough to touch made love so wonderful you held me tight then from my arms you slipped I cried please come back I pray there will be a day some way you will see what you have become that day will make me weep with pride I hope don't you see what you mean to me it hurts my pride you don't trust the ones that love you the most my heart left in your hands I want to bring you close to my bosom I try to hold you most but you pull away what can I say our time was short so beautiful while it lasted your hand on my face tracing lines of ties times of life yes some day Brooke Dylan 2014

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Date: 5/20/2014 4:59:00 PM
I could feel the great sadness in that loss. A great expression of love lost... Bravo!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:57:00 PM
So lovely Brooke, some day, you never know what is around the corner, take care my friend.......................Vera..................
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Date: 5/15/2014 6:37:00 AM
Soup mail my friend
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