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Solstice Moon

Her milky, placid orb peers o’er tan hills As fades the mustard flame of father’s hate Cool succor soothes sharp burns where rage did spill His blinding cruelty will at last abate Our blistered skin, bleached bones white, hills afire This eve, his fevered madness starts to break Grim Solstice marks the peak of father’s ire Soft sunset’s silken shroud engulfs our aches Sun’s dark flight, burning guilt now gone from sight His dusty, wild siroccos brought to calm This night's repose, world bathed in velvet light Pale, tranquil seas of Moon’s face like a balm Pearlescent clouds drift mute across her sphere Fair promise of monsoons, their healing tears 6/22/16 Shakespearean, Mostly Iambic Pentameter

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Date: 9/12/2016 8:16:00 AM
Some truly great imagery here Tom. Congrats on your placement in the contest
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/12/2016 8:56:00 PM
Thanks, John!
Date: 9/11/2016 7:25:00 PM
Very creative imagery in your lovely Sonnet, Tom. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/12/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Date: 9/10/2016 11:46:00 PM
I couldn't help it, Tom. When I read, "Her milky, placid orb," I couldn't control my laughter (in a good way). Sol's dysfunctional family of planets, moons and other bits and pieces. A beautifully written, Shakespearean sonnet. Congrats! :-)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/12/2016 8:58:00 PM
...with a dysfunctional dad...:-) Thanks, Tom!
Date: 9/10/2016 6:57:00 PM
Tom, this is beautifully written, congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/12/2016 8:58:00 PM
Thanks, Luloo!
Date: 9/10/2016 6:45:00 PM
Tom, congratulations on your 1st place win beautiful written . Hugs Eve
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/12/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 7/15/2016 1:13:00 PM
Excellent. A winner.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/16/2016 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Phil!
Date: 7/12/2016 11:25:00 PM
Tom, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/13/2016 6:26:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 7/11/2016 4:37:00 PM
I enjoyed the creative imagery in this write, Tom! Congrats on your placement!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/13/2016 6:27:00 AM
Thanks again!
Date: 7/9/2016 4:26:00 AM
Tomorrow Q., Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/9/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Date: 7/7/2016 11:01:00 AM
TOP LEVEL SONNET MY FRIEND. Great rhyme, flow , imagery and pleasant painting of the night sky's queen..A7 Adding to my fav list as its a true sonnet gem..
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/7/2016 11:45:00 AM
Thanks, Robert! Again a great compliment from you!!
Date: 6/27/2016 4:06:00 PM
this got me from the start ... so gracefully quilled, tom.. sigh!..huggs
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/27/2016 5:56:00 PM
Thanks, Nette! Means a lot coming from you. :-)
Date: 6/26/2016 10:21:00 AM
what a delightful way to paint the soothing ways of Arizona nights. I have been down there when my in-laws used to live there. it was hotter than hell! I take it that is what you referred to by ridiculous! This has a great sonnet feel to it. Loved when you did enjambment, Tom
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/27/2016 5:55:00 PM
Yep, that's what I meant by ridiculous! Thanks for reading!
Date: 6/23/2016 2:37:00 PM
Tom, great descriptive language! Beautiful sonnet!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/23/2016 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 6/23/2016 1:46:00 PM
- Tom, it's beautiful! ..... And it touches me - My fav. lines : "This night's repose, world bathed in velvet light Pale, tranquil seas of Moon’s face like a balm" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/23/2016 4:39:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Date: 6/23/2016 10:16:00 AM
I think it's a beautiful sonnet, Tom.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/23/2016 4:39:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 6/23/2016 8:42:00 AM
Nice sonnet Tom..Hope you get some relief.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/23/2016 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Tim!

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