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Solstice Moon

Once upon a solstice night thou moon in perfect glory hung an effervescent light to tell a lonely story A silhouette of pure white cotton danced on the rain laden ground her rhythm remembered of passion forgotten as beauty seductively moved without sound Fullest moon ah cricket symphonies floating droves of firefly light they found their muse by her solitary mystery 'twas a grandest moment in life What good reason would an olive skinned maiden In bare feet dance under solstice moon? her feelings were larger than her life's narration such grand imagination needs room The only eyes that saw her that night were the nocturnal creatures that prey like men riding high upon entitlements right fierce as time... as it's slipping away She danced a wingless flutter her hair like petals in the wind like dreams laced with summer her eyes were full of fire for the flint To know the riddle of her soul one must know the poets tune examine her language without diminution to know the ghost in the dance which she holds Yes, once upon a solstice night mesmerized by the lure of the moon she left her tears upon her bed and choose instead though alone... her dance with fate to resume

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/7/2014 7:02:00 AM
For some reason I imagine her as a gypsy girl. This has an intoxicative feel to it.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 5/8/2014 3:15:00 PM
Lol it must be the ROMANI in me... Your such a sweetheart Rick, thanks so much.
Date: 5/4/2014 11:53:00 PM
Wow.. This a beautiful work of art. Well done -JT
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Sarai Virden
Date: 5/5/2014 3:27:00 AM
Thanks for stoping by JT. Hope your week finds you blessed!
Date: 5/1/2014 4:05:00 PM
This is BRILLIANT!!! A stunning, most creative write my dearest Sarai! One of the best if not THE best you have written! BRAVO!!!! I was truly mesmerized... love and big hugs, Jack E. XOXOXOX
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Sarai Virden
Date: 5/2/2014 2:02:00 AM
No matter what I write sweet Jack E. I know your my biggest PS fan and my dear dear friend. Thank you for the atta'girl Love n hugs XOXOX

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