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Solitary Abroad

Vehicles flow on the road Engines rumble loudly throughout All vehicles are running on the same road But as each of them is different destination So many people travel back and forth They step on the same path All of them are in a hurry and introvert But they do not converse together Each of them has own target I blend with those people I do not know them and they do not know me as well I only recognize who am I? And where to go? My destination is my beloved motherland I look upon someone's waiting for my return Darling...!! I will be back... Phoukhong SONEVONGXAY Ho Chi Minh City. November 04, 2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2016 11:44:00 PM

Nice to see this one again, Phoukhong, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Panya Chanthavong

Date: 1/11/2016 5:42:00 AM

Hi, Phoukhong. I'm waiting for your new poem here, ^_^ Panya

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 12:19:00 PM

PS, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**

Norman Crocker

Date: 7/18/2015 3:46:00 PM

It is a very beautiful country.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 11:10:00 PM

thank you so much for the nice reply

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2015 5:03:00 AM

- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year - You write very well, Phoukhong - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 11:26:00 AM

Phoukhong SONEVONGXAY, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Phoukhong Sonevongxay
Date: 1/11/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thank you very much for your warm friendship. I would like to learn from you and all friendly poets. Thanks again for your kind support.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/11/2015 9:24:00 AM

Phoukhong, it is a strange feeling being in another place you don't know, then anxious to have the desire to be back home with your love ones. Blessings 7

Phoukhong Sonevongxay
Date: 1/11/2015 11:16:00 AM

When I stay abroad, I always feel homesick and want to go back home. Thank you very much for your comment.

Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts

Date: 1/11/2015 8:57:00 AM

interesting poem. kept my attention

Phoukhong Sonevongxay
Date: 1/11/2015 9:02:00 AM

Nice to meet you. I am new comer. Thank you very much.