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Soliloquy

I am left foaming thoughts - a ship without a Captain, at the mercy of unpredictable winds. Meandering thoughts like an unreliable compass lead me into unknown seas. Lost says that defeated voice in my head; lost echoes the ominous voice that I dread. Broken waves of dreams, dancing fancies that I dreamt, like mist to the sun’s light, gone. Pale paling, fading vapor into frosty silence, you and I split in the middle; our dense, muting laughter no longer covering the reality, you and I torn apart One minus Two without death we part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/7/2012 6:50:00 PM
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Date: 7/6/2012 4:54:00 PM
Sad that lovers part...Great way of expressing the idea..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/6/2012 4:58:00 PM
Thanks Sara. Keep writing and I will keep on reading.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/6/2012 4:55:00 PM
Sherese, Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..Sara
Date: 7/4/2012 7:21:00 PM
Thanks for all your nice comments, Terry.
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Date: 7/4/2012 3:56:00 PM
Nice images... Nice poem! Terry
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/6/2012 5:03:00 PM
Thanks Terry.
Date: 7/3/2012 5:28:00 PM
very nice Sherese..... always ..Joseph
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/6/2012 5:03:00 PM
Thanks Joseph. Keep dreaming and writing.

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