Solace

Ready for the dreams of night Imagine you so close Holding me so near to you I would love that the most Could I be your Juliet And you my Romeo Separated not by death Just as I told you so I found solace in your arms The passion of your touch I wouldn't bring you any harm Or pain of any such What lies within your heart Do you have a wounded soul Are there stitches torn apart Is it dank and cold I hope to find a glimpse of me When I look into your eyes Glance into my soul to see I will never tell you lies.

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Richard Hovelsrud

Date: 8/27/2013 7:08:00 PM

I loved it

Richard Hovelsrud

Date: 7/17/2013 5:15:00 PM

I loved it.

Andrea Travis
Date: 7/27/2013 4:04:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words! One comment is all I need to sharpen my pencil and keep trying. My passions are in short supply these days, so I will try to draw upon the ones of long ago. All feedback greatly appreciated! Thanks again!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2013 8:34:00 PM

wow. Andrea, this is a lovely poem and feeling. I wish I could attract a man who will not question my ways and loving eyes. Searching the deepness in ones heart is true reassuring love. enjoyed~PD