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Society's Unbreakable Cycle

Society’s unbreakable cycle -Vongai Mupetesi Ravening wolves in sheep’s clothing Do not deceived! Their smiles are cunning. Innocent seeming forms, yet truly malicious Bruise the most, and to the mind are really infectious Large round windows of the soul Soon turn to moist fountains Calmly, they perceive the beast’s foul While inside anger accumulates like mountains It is a circle circulating, The society’s system is unbreakable, Sardines are constantly attempting Yet sardines defeating sharks is impossible The culture itself is contaminated Beasts biting and infecting in the process The prey is infected And in turn repeats the process The cycle is unbreakable Unknown is the hour of halt The sharks are uncontrollable And they will never be caught

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Date: 1/29/2018 4:01:00 PM
Hi Vongai, I feel your emotions. Nicely and figuratively put. Take care.
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Date: 11/17/2015 10:20:00 PM
Vongai Tinomudaishe Mupetesi ,, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Vongai Tinomudaishe Mupetesi
Date: 1/30/2018 2:59:00 AM
thanks
Date: 11/5/2015 8:55:00 PM
Vongai, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Vongai Tinomudaishe Mupetesi
Date: 11/12/2015 3:33:00 AM
thank your dear
Date: 11/5/2015 12:01:00 PM
- Hello Vongai :) - Welcome to P - Soup :) - A moving and great first poem from you, a delight to read :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Vongai Tinomudaishe Mupetesi
Date: 11/12/2015 3:34:00 AM
thank you

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