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Society Perfection

She steps onto the scale and watches the numbers rise until they cease. With a shake of her head and a tear in her eye, she thinks to herself, "I'm still obese." She'll skip a meal, maybe two, maybe a few just wishing she could be skinny. Her pants grow bigger as her waist gets smaller. Each day, she worries about the numbers on the scale. It's become routine for her and she's used to missing dinner. If ever her stomach starts to grumble, she'll ignore it and thinks, "Soon, I'll be thinner." The numbers shrink and so does she, but she finds herself still not happy. So she skips breakfast now too and continues working out until her jeans are less than a size two. When her mother worries and forces her to eat, she doesn't fret knowing that when she is done eating then she can rush to the toilet. Behind a locked door with two fingers down her throat, she coughs up her food then flushes it without feeling remorse. The cycle never ended until her life did and it was then she had felt some sort of success...she was truly thin, she was a skeleton. How twisted is society's idea of "perfection" that it has girls losing pounds for affection? Girls and boys alike are skipping meals in search of some satisfaction. Society is twisted, society is wrong. Thin is not the definition of beauty.

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Date: 5/29/2016 12:44:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Kora.:)
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Date: 5/26/2016 3:21:00 AM
Kora B, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/25/2016 6:18:00 PM
This is a good story, Kora,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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