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Soaring Kites

Kites fly high in the air Line spools whiz fast to support Souls twine in joy bare Skies dotted in color transport. Soaring hopes, they are fun If their attitude is strung good Launched fairly, far they run Well bridled, winds they withstood. The young grow with their flight Learning to handle ups and downs Their horizons expanding infinite In the otherwise livid daily frowns. A celebration of our freedom Kites bring cheer to one ‘n all Many take it up as a passion With glorious feats up ‘n tall. Kite-flying in few places is a culture Spreading positive energy and loves Spring and rainy season in particular Allow the Indians to fly them in droves. Date write: 4.7.2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2014 8:13:00 AM

anytime...PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 1:56:00 PM

Mohan, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/30/2014 8:06:00 AM

Thank you for liking my poetry and your wishes.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/28/2014 8:31:00 PM

Big congrats on your fine win!!!!!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 10:48:00 PM

Thanks Robert.

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/28/2014 11:24:00 AM

Beautiful nostalgic write, dear Mohan! Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 10:49:00 PM

Arlene, thanks for your wishes.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2014 9:01:00 AM

Lovely write Mohan! Brings childhood days alive ,, loved flying kites but never won any fights ! Congrats on huge win!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 10:50:00 PM

we did win many and lost many as well.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/28/2014 1:24:00 AM

The old memories told well, Mohan. congrats. I am still fond flying. Last I did in at Myrtle Beach, USA

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 5:54:00 AM

Dr. Ram, kite flying thrills old and young alike across nations. Mohan

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/27/2014 9:11:00 PM

I loved flying a kite when I was a kid, and your poem brought those fun memories back to me.... Nice work, Mohan! Congrats on your win!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 5:55:00 AM

Thanks Kelly for placement in this contest.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/9/2014 1:43:00 PM

Well written, good luck in the contest. It is amazing how kites transcend culture, yet at the same time are very much a part of it.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 5:56:00 AM

Thanks Dave.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/4/2014 5:56:00 AM

Lovely write Mohan ! Flying high n high wid ambitions ! Gl in contest !

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 5:57:00 AM

Thanks Upma, and congrats for your win too in this contest. Mohan

Mark Trichet

Date: 7/4/2014 2:31:00 AM

Bravo Mohan! nice work, I really enjoyed the flight. I loved "Allow the Indians to fly their doves." Brillliant

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/4/2014 2:58:00 AM

Thanks Mark for liking. However, I have slightly changed the last line to '...them in droves' instead of '...their doves' as by kites here I imply not birds but paper kites. Mohan