Soaring

_______ Tread wearing curvature tantalizing negotiation magnetizing energy release speed _______ _ Contest-Ninette

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2012 1:31:00 PM

Soup mail for you, Rick :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2012 2:33:00 PM

VERY, very cool, Rick! Love the way your were able to do the correct syllable count using one word in each line. Also love the "tantalizing negotiation" that eventually releases the energy of passion. Excellent entry for the Ninette contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2012 5:20:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this eve..Will have to check out this contest..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2012 8:57:00 AM

oooh, way to do it. THis one I had hoped to do before going to Iowa. But I doubt it now!! love the last word. It requires speed!!