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Soak It . . .

Pouring down its torrents of warmth I look up to behove this splendid sight Beaming love and happiness on all around Earth drenching its goodness into the ground Each flower peeps out its sensual soul Slowly soaking in this serene whole Each amphibian basking in delirious abandon Coveting each moment in secret longing Avarice and greed, facetious noneties All hold back and surrenders in peace As I deliciously embrace this soul from above Filled with wholesome and pure sublime love Sauntering through this intimate slumber Barefoot and unabashed I inhale this wonder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/5/2009 9:25:00 AM
Beautiful poem! Nice use of imagery and alliteration. The title is interesting. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing. Have a nice day! Karen
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Date: 3/3/2009 9:34:00 PM
You are so talented. I love the way your words speak from your soul. I think this is a beautiful piece. I look forward to reading more of your work. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 2/22/2009 4:37:00 AM
Simply gorgeous Sonnet about nature. You put your heart and soul into this so beautifully. Great to read you again! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/21/2009 7:21:00 AM
Smile~"Hello Precious & Gifted Fathima!!!"~What a truly 'Beautiful & Lovely Write' which You poured from "Your Heart & Soul" here dear!!!~So gentle and serene, and filled with images and thoughts of magnificent wonders~taking the reader unto a state and place, somewhat like paradise I would say!!!~"Excellent & Astonishing Write My Dear Friend!!!"~"Warmth & Blessings Always To You & Your Loves, John!":)
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Date: 2/21/2009 3:29:00 AM
beautifully written!! this form is so beautiful... but i can't seem to write anything... but yours sure give me inspiration!! lovely reading it.. ~ Arany
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