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so pathetic

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so pathetic

Ever walk through the woods with just a candle?
Confident that you know right where you are going.
Feel the wind blow and your light disappear. 
Anger will help you get there, 
Angry that the wind took your light
Angry that the darkness is always what you seem to have to fight
Rage builds, as you realize hope was so easily takin away
That all your goals and all your plans, relied on this one fragile thing
Never in all the planning did you for see, A step without it's guidance 
The trees whisper plotting their revenge 
Running now, lost in the darkness 
A clearing where the moon can shine through 
As you step into the blue light you see
This is where you should never be
Where is your undying confidence now?
Where is you anger that will push you through 
It's all as lost as you.
No more will to fight, discussed at your own sight.
You lay your head down, begging for the end of this life.
But even though the cold rips through your cloths and the snow covers you
Your broken heart still beats, Your mind still traces his lips
And pretends you can hear his voice tell you it'll be ok
But it's the same sound that took your light away 
Now the only reason you know your still alive is the pain
And you realize you would take the beating each and everyday 
Just to have him say 
He loved you again, Now remember how pathetic you are my friend? 

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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 5:28:00 PM
    Sejia, this poem is full of deep emotions with many wonderful lines, constance