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So High

....so        high

        on 
                    life


Went on a vision quest,
never coming down
never coming back down.

Spirits follow me through supermarkets,
pointing out the ones with dark auras
as I handle stale produce bound in abomination.
The spirits say to stay away from the bad ones,
for these cannibals handle packages of flesh buried in shallow graves.
Oh! I know the look of cannibals
who carry around an extra Y chromosome,
serving delusional missions of a false god.
Yes, stay away!
Stay away from my family!

They are preaching from the highest mountain top-
doesn't matter,
as I am already 

    so        high

        on 
                    life


Went on a vision quest,
climbing up higher,
never coming down
never coming back down.

One gigantic interconnected lifeform,
but the sacrificial ram cannot see

    anymore.

Farmer Jim drops by with his special tin cup,
filling it up with fresh blood____crimson rivulets pour from a cut throat.
Steam rising in the crisp morning air,
he tips back his wide face taking deep draughts,

    and I

pretend to be a man
even though I am merely a boy,
stopping myself from throwing up curdled breakfast
as farmer Jim wipes lips with a rust coloured sleeve-
a self-medicated sleeve of selfish memories.

They cannot move,
impaled upon a white picket fence,
laughing at me,
but I simply keep moving on,
a dreamwalker switching the tracks
towards a sunrise of futuristic endeavors.

7 deaths and 7 births
trying to fit through the needle's eye-

     I am                  so high

               on     
                       life


Was told to never say never,
but I am flying above the boundaries now,
swimming across the borders of dreams,
coming apart at the seams
so that I may be put back together again.


Going on another vision quest,
climbing ever higher,
tearing open my third eye
with the drums of our Earth,
with the drums of dreamwalkers,
never coming down
never coming down.

                                                 

                                              March 1st, 2011

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  1. Date: 4/29/2011 10:43:00 PM
    oh btw-- your My Cat write hit 200++ views?? wow!! Amazing!! see? so many people love your work, you should be so touched! I think I only clicked on that poem three times? wow. 200++ views, wowwww!!!

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 10:41:00 PM
    oh my GOSHHHHHHH-- somebody got HIGH, so HIGHHHHHHHHHH??? are you ok??? hahahaha!! lol -- I am out the door- but I saw my comments inbox, had some good amount of comments but when I scrolled down, oh WOWSERS!! I think your name is seared in my brain nnow! geeezzz--- lol, well remember when I said fight craziness with nuttiness?? LOL, be scared, be very very scared-- & hmm you didn't do good enough? my write isn't no, 1??? oh BOOHOO! thanks for the Laugh, Mr. Cat!

  1. Date: 3/14/2011 12:58:00 PM
    I read and learn

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 8:44:00 AM
    Hi Chris, Wow! is all I can say. Many congrat's on your well deserved FIRST PLACE win. Sensational writing! Lainie

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 9:14:00 AM
    whooo! soup mail!! :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 11:36:00 PM
    well, of COURSE you scored top rating! I just knew it! congratulations, Chris.

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 12:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in John Heck's "Hey...Mr. Editor" contest Chris. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 4:48:00 AM
    What can I say but you definitely deserved to rank SO HIGH on this contest ;)!! See, you underestimate yourself sometimes?? Super duper happy for you this won :D-- way to go Chris, and I can just imagine how excited you got when you saw your super win-- super congrats to you :D!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 12:06:00 AM
    This is perhaps one of the most unique pieces I have ever read! Read 3 times. Got 3 meanings. Maybe I am high on life Thanks for sharing this poem, ~JS Lambert

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 9:01:00 PM
    excellent Winner Chris, missed this contest, damm. Just love Farmer Jim and his special cup. Congrats. Brilliant, Harry

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 5:59:00 PM
    Great to see you at the top Chris, beautiful job. Congratulations on your worthy first place honor. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 3:11:00 PM
    Big congratulations on taking first place, Chris. This poem is awesome! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 2:49:00 PM
    Chris!! Congratulations on your MOST deserving Ist Place win in John's Contest! ...no surprise here, as you are one of the best! Annalise

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 1:27:00 PM
    Ohh yeah baby it's YOU! So happy for YOU #1 head honcho man!! with such a unique write! John in closer touch with the real art community than most of us so maybe we're NOT doing too bad aye? NOT too shabby! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 1:13:00 PM
    How can I praise this enough?!! There are a few of you, who I am earnestly trying hard to learn, watch, and perhaps improve my abilities, just by reading your works. Wonderful writing, Chris! I'm in complete agreement with John's choice!!

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 12:41:00 PM
    Awesome congrats .. Awesome entry ... Awesome poetic genius... Awesome Chris.. get it? AWESOME win .. enjoy your first place .. luv..

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 10:35:00 AM
    Like I said, never heard of vision quests before you mentioned them -- and this sure looks like major heavy duty one -- enjoyed bringing "brought along" in this vision quest, especially liked your last stanza for this-- and wish you the best in judging your contest -- haha I am still thinking whether I'm gonna post a contest myself? hmmmm

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 1:34:00 PM
    Ps. *Smile ~ Just in case you ever peep this moments treat, Chr*s ~ You know, since the very first time that I arrived at TheSoup, I have had a bit of a connection with Canada's own from, Julie Bristow, Elaine George, Michelle Mac Donald, Troy Nelson, Colleen Laforme ~ Smile, *Sweeeties...."See You Later Alligator;" Bye!:) ~

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 1:29:00 PM
    Smile ~ Ooops, I guess you beat myself to it but, I do understand, my friend ~

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 1:27:00 PM
    Smile ~ Wow, what an exceptional and intense painting of a soulful journies poe brushed amid the colours of brilliance i would somewhat say and, nothing better than a visions quest to find oneself perhaps upon a higher plateau per se ~ also, 'thank you,' for visiting and no, cannot see a block coming my dear gifted friend ~ love, Always, christopher ~

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