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So Devine

As by some devine presence, I've been burdened with the gift of life. Things become completely complicated, playing this game, our teeth become enticed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/10/2011 10:30:00 PM
This is really good. I can never do short poems well, so I really admire people who can.
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Johnny Scianna
Date: 10/10/2011 11:30:00 PM
Thank you raven, I really appreciate the comment on my work.il def go and look sy your work and make comments on the ones I enjoy.
Date: 10/10/2011 6:04:00 AM
lol, yep! diggin' your writes, thanks :) ~N
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