So Cruel (Repost)

In the darkness , I hear voices saying “ Rest-in Peace “ The sound, of thunder, the shovel full of sweet earth Cascading upon my casket Death is Imminent In the silence of my thoughts I await the Heavenly Light The quietude of Death, the dreams of my beloved LENORE Soon I will leave this Limbo, this blacken Purgatory. In life I waited decades for OUR Souls to become ENTWINED My most beloved LENORE : Where is the GLORY of FOREVER? This is my grim and ghastly, soundless colourless ETERNITY No songs of My LENORE, no brilliance of LENORE’S Beauty SO CRUEL SO VERY CRUEL

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/3/2012 10:50:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this dark, beautiful poem. Always, Laura

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/16/2010 9:20:00 PM

I am deeply sorry. this is a great woe you have written. bless you both. . although, i can see you already have. your poetry is always so warming. and about a "darker side" to me. there is one.. but everyone that is human should. i barely bring my darker side out though. it confuses too many people. and im not so fond of causing that. . [Touching write of your genuine feelings] -Always & Forever Lynn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/22/2009 10:41:00 PM

HG, Your passions are pouring out in these writes. The emotions are strong. I'm pretty sure that Lenore would not want you to suffer so much. She would understand that just because you love someone else, doesn't mean that you love lenore less. Just differently, now. Humans need companionship. Without love, life can become unbearable. Your writing exudes emotions...It is good. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/22/2009 1:42:00 PM

this is so sad good friend of ours,heartfelt and deep--destiny can be cruel,but always kin in the end,when we all shall meet again with our lost loved ones---charma

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/22/2009 3:12:00 AM

Hun this is better than the other one Of Cruel!Love the Repost Althoguht both Have the same power=) Gone to my favs!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/21/2009 8:30:00 PM

Oh HG...how I wish I could ease your pain. You will be with her again..its been promised. Barbeeg.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/21/2009 7:01:00 PM

Comments: posted 7/30/2007 7:31:00 PM by Katherine Stella Remember what God say's tho everyone taken away someone will be replaced have faith and may she find comfort in the arms of our savior so sorry for your lost my friend outstanding form writting keep up the great work HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/21/2009 6:59:00 PM

Comments: posted 7/31/2007 8:40:00 AM by Vince Suzadail Jr. Heartfelt write. Vince

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/21/2009 6:57:00 PM

Comments: posted 7/31/2007 8:43:00 AM by sharon weimer Raw emotion. Those horrid memories of losing a loved one we can never, no matter how we try, get out of our head and heart. I feel your pain and sadness. So wish you could find someone to comfort you to help ease your suffering. Amazingly strong poetry. Will be thinking of you. Love, Shar

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/21/2009 6:56:00 PM

Comments: posted 7/31/2007 7:58:00 PM by Marycile Beer HGarvey, I agree Life Is Cruel but we aren't in charge and we never know what the reason things turn out like they do. Very touching poem, God Bless, Cile

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/21/2009 6:54:00 PM

Comments: posted 2/26/2008 10:01:00 AM by Carol Brown We do feel it is cruel when one we love is taken from us. But know that when they are in the arms of our Lord they are taken care of. They wait for the day to come that we are together with them once more. Love, Carol