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So Broken

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So Broken

This place we're at
Is as broken
As the currents
Of my wretched heart - soul
And whatever the hell else makes
Me who you think I am.

The walls bleed with Vodka and I want
It more and more and more and
When you look at me
I don't have to confess...
You already know
It's on my breath.

I wanted to sing you a song
Before we made love
But the drink carried me off and 
Deserted
Me half alive on a dream
Across the world.

Tomorrow,
Hung over and torn with regret,
I shall look at you
And wish the pain of my
Beaten miserable past
Would abandon it's torment of 
Our future.

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  1. Date: 4/8/2009 9:59:00 AM
    Powerful, and great. I love this poem truly. Everything else has no need to be said, or already is. great write. Love, Jessica

  1. Date: 1/7/2009 1:23:00 AM
    Powerful writing... reminds me of a short story by Carson McCullers about alcoholism - '...and sorrow parallels desire in the immense complexity of love' - her last line. BRAVO Joseph! Best wishes, Keith