Get Your Premium Membership

Snowy Night

The clock struck twelve, we took a stroll, And wandered, happy, in the snow. We crossed a road, no cars, no bus, The street deserted but for us: That night it seemed the world was ours. The moon was hidden, and the stars. If anyone looked out and saw Us dancing, laughing - and my fall, Perhaps they wondered at our mirth. As snowflakes drifted down to earth, We stopped to have a snowball fight. And snow kept falling all that night. For Francine's Winter Couplet contest - walk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/30/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "A Winter Couplet" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/28/2011 11:44:00 PM
congrats on your second place win in the contest Jack, beautiful and upbeat
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2011 9:57:00 AM
We may be adults, but snow transforms us back to our childhood. How sweet it must be to walk a snowy road and laughing and dancing in the still night air. Terrific entry for Francine's contest and this is sure to be among the winner. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2011 5:55:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry and wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Jack. May inspiration come into your soul each and every day. I will stop in at the Soup and see how you are doing from time to time. Love and best wishes always, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2011 9:27:00 PM
You have done an exquisite job of your descriptions, illustrious and imaginative, Jack! I felt the whole scene come together due to your images you gave us through immaculate words!! Gorgeous work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2011 6:56:00 PM
Sounds like two lovers in fairyland having the time of their life. Beautiful imagery.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2011 5:18:00 PM
Jack, I really enjoyed reading this one. Pure delight!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2011 5:08:00 PM
such a lovely Winter full of imagery Jack..good luck in the contest luv.. we will be getting that snow all too soon here.. we already had an October snowstorm..oh..where is the beach??
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2011 2:25:00 PM
You and I share this memory. Tony
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things