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Snow Falls On the Lake

snow falls on the lake stars of ice returning home.... winter's renewal

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Shadaab Mumtaz

Date: 1/18/2011 5:18:00 PM

Nice! Simple yet meaningful. I would like to invite you to read my poem 'The White Snow'. I would appreciate your comments. Love

James Fraser

Date: 1/4/2011 1:18:00 PM

Seasonal bliss in your words Deb....:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2011 6:03:00 AM

lovely and blissful write, enjoyed,..p.d.

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/4/2011 5:05:00 AM

Hi Deb. Great imagery here. Love the idea that life is a circle, lake to cloud to ice, on and on. I don't come from farming stock but fishing. When I was young (12) I was sent to work with the farmers until I was strong enough for fishing, so have experience of both. Thanks for your interest and kind comments. Eamon

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/3/2011 1:12:00 PM

Nice images to creat a pleasing picture of the winter's renewal. Good luck, deb

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/3/2011 5:46:00 AM

Nice desriptive Haiku on winter taking control....always enjoy your Poetry my dear....love Michael