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''snow''

In the night snow began and in my dream I danced in the white I twirled and swirled and floated with the filigree snow oh snow kiss my red lips and take away my weeping sad tears with your frozen beauty ____________________ November 16, 2015 Poetry/Fibonacci/"Snow" Copyright Protected, ID 15-726-789-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Snow, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton First Place

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Kim Merryman

Date: 11/25/2015 4:44:00 PM

A lovely winter write! Congrats on your 1st place win, Constance! Love, Kim

Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2015 7:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats, Kim ~

Jack Horne

Date: 11/21/2015 4:00:00 PM

this is a lovely fibonacci

Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2015 7:37:00 AM

Jack, thanks for the lovely, yes I like this form a lot ~

Lin Lane

Date: 11/21/2015 3:44:00 AM

The picture of your lady sets the proper mood for reading this. Congratulations, BW.

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 7:37:00 AM

Lin, thanks for visiting and for the congratulations, appreciate ~

Jan Allison

Date: 11/21/2015 3:35:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 7:37:00 AM

Jan, thanks for coming back and for the congrats, appreciate ~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/20/2015 11:43:00 PM

Another delightful read Broken.. congrats on top place win!

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 7:38:00 AM

Upma, thanks for the delightful and for the congrats, appreciate ~

Eve Roper

Date: 11/20/2015 10:41:00 PM

Your writes are always so beautiful. Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 7:39:00 AM

Eve thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations, so nice ~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/20/2015 9:50:00 PM

Poignant and beautiful Constance! Congratulations on your number one placement. Great to be in your company!

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 7:40:00 AM

Connie, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations, it is an honor to share number one place with you ~

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 7:56:00 PM

Lovely win Broken. SKAT

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 7:41:00 AM

Skat, thanks for the lovely, I like that ~

James Inman

Date: 11/17/2015 9:47:00 AM

Wonderful write, I haven't seen snow for a couple of years. The imagery is gentle but lingers.

Constance La France
Date: 11/17/2015 10:02:00 AM

Thanks for visiting James, oh I am looking forward to the snow starting in my part of Canada, none yet here, but lots in other places in my country, it is always wonderful at first then becomes a nightmare... love walking in the gentle snow falling ~

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/16/2015 7:04:00 PM

The good part is that we get to observe the snow from time to time in all its beauty. And yet, as you well know, there is also much to mourn. We can only hope for these little things to take some of the sadness away. It doesn't always work. May your days be a little less sad and little more filled with joy. Thank-you for being here and sharing your moments of all kinds. You are indeed the sadness expert on this site. Very interesting experiences have you had, yet your life is joy for us.

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 11:21:00 PM

Duke, thanks for that lovely comment, oh yes indeed if they had a contest for the sadness poet, I would sure be included, of course sadness is my forte, sorrow has made me the poet I am ~