Snow

snow its cold I hate it numbing my face I can hardly talk freezing my hands and feet I hate the cold winter nights when I'm all alone and thinking will these cold winter days ever end? I hope that spring will come a bit early

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/27/2011 12:10:00 AM

getting giddy for spring with this expressive write, eddee... :) superb! hugggs, nette

Eddee Shaz

Date: 1/26/2011 8:52:00 PM

it was there I just forgot it oops Brain cells running all together makes for stormy weather inside your head Thanks es

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2011 8:47:00 PM

A nice write here. However, where is your three syllable line? A suggestion: how about adding "As it falls" for your three syllable line?

I Dream In Poetry

Date: 1/26/2011 8:45:00 PM

I too am tired of snow! Nice poem:)