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Below is the poem entitled Smoke which was written by poet Dr. Upma A. Sharma. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Smoke emanating from heart,
Stirring ideas sprout in brain,
Giving flush to my face...........

Path is scary,
Heart pounces to protrude out 
the breast bone,
Legs shake in trepidation.........

I am awake with heavy eyelids,
With hope that glitters in my 
And arms await a tight 

Candles glow in pitch dark,
Only bright spots that 
Moments of togetherness......

You tune up to my delight,
Addicted to me, a surprise,
Smoke engulfs............
To nobody's sight..........!!!

Rhyme -go  jazzy 
Contest - Groove it
Name and theme - Smoke
Written by:
Dr. Upma Sharma
On 19/10/13

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  1. Date: 5/9/2014 7:01:00 AM
    Beautiful poem, Dr. Upma! Thanks for your congrats. But we are all #1 in my opinion. Peace...Sam

  1. Date: 5/8/2014 11:37:00 AM
    This is such a lovely write Dr! one of my personal favourites in contest. loved the two final lines! / congrats. // paul

    A. Sharma Avatar Dr. Upma A. Sharma
    Date: 5/8/2014 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad u liked !! This is a real emotional one n I love it too ,,, it came out in just few minutes ,, thanks !
  1. Date: 5/8/2014 10:19:00 AM
    Dr Umpa, . Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)

    A. Sharma Avatar Dr. Upma A. Sharma
    Date: 5/8/2014 12:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD ! Ur contests r awesome .... Any poem any theme any form ... But really tough to contest ! Love always // Upma //
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:26:00 PM
    Enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 11:58:00 AM
    Dr Upma, ... congratulations on your win...LINDA

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Dr. Upma

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:37:00 PM
    lovely write and fine win...congrats to you :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 12:28:00 PM
    Loved the poem, doctor and congrats on your win in the contest...much deserved! Julie :-)