Smog

mountains sip coffee from the cup of Thunderbird smell of gasoline smog haiku+a bonus word

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/14/2015 12:41:00 PM

good haiku Rajat hugs

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/14/2015 7:31:00 AM

I like the imagery in this one. Very stark and real.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2015 10:08:00 PM

a very different kind of image!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2015 11:11:00 AM

Interesting work..The plants and trees help cleanse the air but sometimes it is over powered with so much of the elements that clog it..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/13/2015 10:18:00 AM

confusing my friend the mountain can not sip coffee? the thunderbird does not own a cup? haiku are factual sensory not imaginary dear Light & Love

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/13/2015 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Debbie. I'll do what you say. You are right. Love