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Smitten Old Man

SMITTEN OLD MAN High school year book, 47 I’m not a gad looking guy – Short hair, sport coat, tie This remembered as I gaze across the room She’s sitting at a table near the wall, Lap top open, ear phones, late and all She wears a sleeveless blouse On a cookie now I’m nibbling, But, my God, her arm! What’s that scribbling? From distance the appendage looks solid black Is she weird, some sort of voodoo? “No, you idiot!” I laugh. “Just a tattoo.” Through her tangled blond hair a streak of purple, No cosmetics improve the sallow face, Clothes, by 40s standards, a national disgrace I’m smitten – chair seat a bed of nails, Arthritis rebels, bony hands clutch - This modern generation, it’s just too much! Dave Austin

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Date: 11/29/2015 9:37:00 AM
Its all madness I say..' Madness and fleeting awareness, there I've said it and 'twill be the case of someone will have read it..' At some point.. some time place margin or space..'
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:29:00 PM
Great poem and I was a 1972 high school graduate that saw plenty of outrageous dress back in the day. Myself, Tats look cool on guy, on a girl I am not a fan of seeing tats. Enjoyed this poem. A7
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Date: 10/10/2014 11:56:00 AM
Love today's youth.
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Daver Austin
Date: 10/17/2014 10:05:00 AM
Wish I had some of it. Love, daver
Date: 10/9/2014 10:06:00 AM
Cute one, Dave..Changes come don't they and some are good and some so bad..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 10/8/2014 5:01:00 PM
Being a part of the "younger" generation, I understand why they want to look, the way they look. It is just a desire for freedom, to be themselves and be unique. A rebellious attitude has always been attractive.... A very good write, Daver. Well expressed!
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:06:00 PM
Some of the things I see young people doing or wearing these days leave me in awe. Even in her 50s, my brother-in-law's sister has a crimson streak through her dark brown hair. (Blonde or white streak might have looked nice.) Don't get me started on the clothes or tattoos. I think the pierced noses, tongues and eyebrows are the weirdest though. Hey, another time, another place. Love, Carolyn
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