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Smiles For You

Maybe it's the way you talk
But it's watching you walk
That makes my heart knock

It could be those tight jeans
Your love handles are quite lean
When I think about it I scream

Edward J Ebbs - April 10, 2012

Written for Russell Sivey's
1-6 Lines of Romance & Love Free Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:20:00 PM
    :)sweet post

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 2:04:00 PM
    Brilliant Ed.....congrats !!! well done! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 7:16:00 PM
    I LIKE this. Congratulations, ED

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 1:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Ed. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 9:20:00 AM
    I always wondered what men were looking at, now I know it's not the love handls. Thanks for the smile. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 5:37:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Ed. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 1:51:00 PM
    lol, love the love handles line Ed, you added some wit to yours.. Me like ;) congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 8:27:00 AM
    dcongrats Ed on a wonderful write and win luv for contest by Russell..

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 12:47:00 AM
    a smooth delight,this is.well done.