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His big brown eyes-- --linger in A distance... I Smile back at him.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/6/2013 2:56:00 PM
You know the funny thing is when i clicked on this poem and read it,I smiled as i envisioned myself @ 15 and fell in love with a brown eyed guy, that's exactly how I felt. And the poem gives off that sudden feeling of spring then it just flies passed so short and sweet,those 3 lines. I think I'm gonna write about him,lol. I am inspired.
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 1/15/2013 8:38:00 PM
Keep smiling Wendia, love making ppl smile, and inspiration, is what I love too see, and I can't wait to read about your him lol love always my dear poet..
Date: 12/5/2012 8:52:00 PM
Hello, Carma I imagine this guy smiling at you,,, weee...I know the feeling when a guy smiles at me.. I look right back and add a blink to that smile I'm sending him... love this ku...pd
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/5/2012 11:35:00 PM
Hi PD I know he is, for sure I am that LUCKY GIRL in his eye...
Date: 12/2/2012 7:37:00 PM
this is so sweet
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/3/2012 2:58:00 PM
Thank You Linda
Date: 12/1/2012 2:10:00 PM
Carma, are you giving somebody the eye? Lol. Nice one. Love ya, Toquyen
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/1/2012 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Toquyen ,LOL u found me out lol
Date: 11/30/2012 7:58:00 PM
Very nice Haiku Carma... :o)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/1/2012 7:09:00 AM
Thank you much my dear friend Dan, enjoy ur stuff too!! Xoxo Carma
Date: 11/30/2012 5:32:00 PM
Really good Carma, great imagery. Rollo
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/1/2012 7:08:00 AM
Thanks much Rollo, hope the image was great lol
Date: 11/30/2012 5:05:00 PM
It was tricked ..... I had done the same thing ... lol ... Very good haiku Carma. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/1/2012 7:07:00 AM
A fates twist... Lol thank you much Anna-Lise enjoyed yours as well, smile big, :) have a wonderful Saturday xoxo Carma

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