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Smell Your Perfume

                                         smell of Your perfume
                                          threatens my heart
                              almost sent me straight into my doom
                                     my heart needs a restart

26 Desember 2011

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  1. Date: 8/24/2014 10:44:00 AM
    Ana, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/20/2014 3:31:00 PM
    Excellent write! I got to get me some of that perfume...LOL :) Ana

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 4:46:00 AM
    thank goodness your heart is still working after the perfume lol :) soupmail :-) love & hugs CTC

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 7:14:00 AM
    Re. Right to Love.... great write my brother but if for my contest no name on it....

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 7:32:00 PM
    well, i keep clicking and clicking but I"m certain I am caught up on all your poetry. So I came back to this one. It's really great, Arild. I was reading again some of your newer stuff and thinking that I can see the progress you have made here since you began coming to soup!!

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 11:01:00 AM
    Great Write...Arild

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 5:19:00 PM
    You've captured so much emotion in four short lines. Very well written!

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 12:34:00 PM
    Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Arild. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:29:00 PM
    : ) That perfume really stirred your heart, Arild! This speaks volumes his short but sweet sentiment in this little verse should melt her heart too! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 1:39:00 PM
    Captivating read.

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 5:33:00 PM
    Hu,,,,,..well that must had been some perfume.. Arlid, and thank you always for your comments... believe it or not... your comments make my moments better... Hope you are smiling right now...if not...I will tickle your poem till you or i can let out some ga$... and ruin that perfume i went to far on the you just make me smile... ... best wishes this year, can't wait to read more of your work this year. Always ~p.d.

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    Date: 1/8/2012 2:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    just don`t let out gas after drinking beer..smells awful.. :)
  1. Date: 1/1/2012 8:45:00 AM
    these wrds are very sensitive....hopefully the one behind those wrds reads them too...cheers Arild...u have a wonderful wrk here

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 6:03:00 AM
    Arild did you ever notice a perfume on someone made you think of a special person with loving feelings . Good poem!! Anne

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 11:20:00 PM
    I hope there is somebody nearby who knows how to do CPR! You made an assemblage of a few words convey vivid descriptiveness. Good work.

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 3:23:00 PM
    This poem was an interesting read. It made my day. Thanks for sharing your work, and thanks for your comments Jancarl

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 8:31:00 PM
    This one is fun to read, Arlid. Hope you liked DAver's stuff!

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 2:28:00 PM
    Yes! I caught a movie with Jennifer Lopez the other day. What a wonderful rear view. My pacemaker went crazy. Happy New Year back atcha. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 12:07:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your romantic creation..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 10:16:00 AM
    lovely deep feelings here. enjoyed. harry

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 1:42:00 AM
    Arild, 'my heart needs a restart' too when I read your comment. Thank you, it's nice to be missed. Love this simple yet passionate piece you got here ;)