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Smell In Nothingness

I can't seem to get a hold of life together Its not life really, but parts of it. When poignant eyes hover around silent cell phones, Mixed emotions, bluff to forgiveness But inside, its just pain. Lost the days which are never to be found, I scream in a mute tone The silence controls the dreams That will turn into nightmares soon, Poisoned in hopelessness, I smile The ravens salivate: Dear friend, It wont be long till the tears will be sweet, The obscurity unraveling the true bonds Between our dazzled souls, Blindfolded we are: Its you that want her and Me another, But deep down where the crater kisses the dried, Strangled veins that were once enriched with blood, The flower that had the fragrance of life Was planted, And it still lives, overshadowed by vines: shrieking "Help Me! Love Me! Show me the way to happiness, please!" Poisoned in hopelessness, I smile The ravens salivate. ~~Thank You for the reviews and comments~

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Date: 10/2/2010 12:46:00 AM
Touching and impressing>> I can perceive the stench of nothingness in this piece..
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