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A REPOST SLIGHTLY ADJUSTED

 

It makes sense that we need to function as a team. Even one less pebble can bring down the lot.

small gifts - contributing to other's happiness? # show me a man or woman of simple mind people who we commonly term as slow # point out ====> people  of simple means<==== the poor,  the sick,  the hungry. {direct me to someone of simple needs a person with his ear to the ground.} find me* : a so called loser: with a winning smile! the kind you   -photograph- then   -file- let me find a giving person of "warm heart" a parent who loves their child (ren) bring them forward  ~ the diseased ~ that never complain or cry' gather  the  people  too kind  to ask. [the child]  quietly  lost inside ! round up ! the addicts,  the homeless, the ones who accept their stock in life that never would even think to steal or lie (huddled)  like embryos happy to quietly die. show me.......................families  with................adjoining hearts one for  all and all  for one  in practice not just words. people who give of their time to help the  .......................................................................needy who travel to third world countries  ~~~~~~make the ultimate sacrifice. show me a person kind a person of simple mind show me a person considers their acts no more than a small gift i'll show you a person closer to God then you or i. 05~12~2014 Sponsor: Brian Johnston Contest Name: Small Gifts - Contributing to Other's Happiness

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Date: 4/25/2017 6:50:00 AM
Good Morning Maurice. What a beautiful entry. So much humanity compassion and understanding. These are words to be seen and heard. Contest or no contest this entry stands on its own. Be proud. Well done in its entirety. It was a pleasure to turn to your page this morning.
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:36:00 AM
Love it! True though. Time is precious and having compassion helping people around feels grateful. www.bhavzparadise.com
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:15:00 PM
You really nailed this theme, Armand. did I see the original of this one. I hope so. but it must be different somehow. Maybe for playing around with the formatting and all. I think what you are leading up to, that final statement, is SUPERB. a 7!!
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Date: 12/5/2014 7:30:00 PM
So true Maurice. Things I think of very often. Excellent write. 7+fav.
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Date: 12/5/2014 11:44:00 AM
Wonderful !!
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Date: 12/5/2014 11:20:00 AM
Excellent write Maurice - Good luck in the contest this is a gift of a poem my friend:-) God moves in mysterious ways my friend and there are some amazing people out there:-) Hugs Jan xx
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