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Slow Love Slow Death

Slowly you entered my life Slowly you made it beautiful Slowly I took you to be mine Slowly this life became wonderful Slowly you made me love you Slowly it increased with time Slowly I was all yours Slowly life became melodious as a rhyme Slowly from me you got bored Slowly you lost all interest Slowly you craved to move on Slowly I was left in a state of unrest Slowly you left me Slowly I became depressed and cold Slowly I choked down, 'caus Slowly I caught death in my hold

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Skat A

Date: 12/31/2015 9:48:00 PM

that's deep, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/14/2011 11:11:00 AM

Love the last line, -I caught death in my hold-

Guneet Singh
Date: 9/15/2011 4:06:00 AM

thanks Dinda..its great to have your comments

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2011 2:38:00 PM

a moving emotional write Guneet and a romantic piece with brilliant beginning and untimely ending luv.. nothing lasts forever..shame.. even luv.. fascinating piece luv..

Guneet Singh
Date: 9/15/2011 4:07:00 AM

thanks a lot Linda for the lovely comment.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2011 10:59:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Guneet.

Guneet Singh
Date: 9/15/2011 4:08:00 AM

thanks carol. have a nice day.