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Slipping Into Gray Hours

Soft, moist clay settles on humus of the earth Whispering winds brushing drags of my girth And graveyards dressed in gauze know he is there While sorrow rips this heart almost, almost bare If my heart still breaks in a field of tombs Where my only love sleeps in pale of wombs I’d rather lie on his arms with my starved eyes Than slip into hours lonely, choking my sighs And in this world, I trace my fingers on his name Sinking into memories now in ashen forms, oh pain As his laughter engulfs me in silence of graves’ melody Deaf now in echoes of raked, raked eternity I stare at roses gray like my ruffled hair strands Planting seeds in our garden missing a pair of hands The beats of a daily requiem skips, petals falling Angels fair, bring me to him on near night calling ------ HGarvey Daniel Esquire's If I Have a Broken Heart by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/24/2015 9:51:00 PM
this really tugs at the heartstrings nette - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2015 7:25:00 PM
Wonderfully done nette. Congratulations on win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:10:00 PM
Nette,, congratulations on your Broken Heart win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:00:00 AM
Dear Nette, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Thank-YOU for supporting my Contest: " If I had a Broken Heart " Congratulations, YOU have quilled the exact feelings I was looking for.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 7/24/2015 12:59:00 AM
Deep and beutiful nette!Congrats on ur superb win!
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Date: 7/4/2012 5:14:00 AM
Substantive message you have written. Deep imagery casting light to its subject. Good luck to the contest. (^_^).
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Date: 7/4/2012 12:59:00 AM
Very heartfelt write here by you Nette.A great entry to the contest.
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Date: 7/3/2012 7:45:00 PM
This well-written Rhyme tugs at the heart, Nette. I know HG will love this. Well done! Thanks for stopping by...always appreciated. . Love, Annalise
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Date: 7/3/2012 4:45:00 PM
Wow, your writings are so strong and superb in every way, Nette! I just love your intellect and the powerful words you share with us...not to mention your incredible emotions you share, a devotion so fantastic! This is yet another grandiose poem! You are a divine writer! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/3/2012 3:56:00 PM
Your words ease my troubled spirit today nette. I thank you. Peace and blessings.
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Date: 7/3/2012 2:44:00 PM
Winner for sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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