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Below is the poem entitled slimming which was written by poet jan oskar hansen. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Shadorma (slimming) 

Low fat cheese
Tastes like rubber soles
For weight loss
I eat it
Abusing my true taste buds
 And I am still fat

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  1. Date: 11/29/2011 6:13:00 AM
    I do understand, and can easily relate. :) Catie

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 11/29/2011 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Catie