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Slices of Splash

For a slice of splash From the yellow and green sky Through a chance window Both you and I lie in wait Sands of our blue time restless ______________________________________ 20/10/2016

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/28/2016 2:29:00 PM

Very visually romantic poem, Probir. I love this one, putting it in my fave. Love always to you. RW

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 11:46:00 PM

Thank you so much ...

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 10/21/2016 10:58:00 AM

Beautifully expressed tanka.... enjoyed reading....thanks for dropping by..

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 1:06:00 AM

Thank you ...

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/20/2016 11:13:00 PM

Wow, you really painted the canvas of your poetry with pretty colorful words. A 7

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/21/2016 4:57:00 AM

Thank you

Paloma P

Date: 10/20/2016 5:21:00 PM

Amazing Probir, you paint with broad strokes. 'blue time restless', that sums it up nicely. Love the title too.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/21/2016 4:58:00 AM

Thank you so much ...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/20/2016 12:11:00 PM

tugging at the heartstrings, probir.. so charmingly written..huggs

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/21/2016 4:59:00 AM

ha ha ... thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/20/2016 5:54:00 AM

Your Tanka is not a slice but the whole sky of romance dear, Probir! A seven!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/20/2016 7:13:00 AM

Depends upon who is reading ... to some like you the entire sky ... to some other moment fry ! ... thank you ...

White Wolf

Date: 10/19/2016 10:24:00 PM

Great tanka Probir, I just did my first thanks to you. It's an interesting form. /|\

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/19/2016 10:29:00 PM

You may read my reply to Paloma's comments also to my preceding tanka Window ... Thank you ...