Sleepy Soul

indigo has fallen upon my lovely petunias they are patiently waiting because they do love the sun quiet calm has fallen upon my heart the gossamer winged angels are patiently waiting to astound me,surround me guide me to dreamland meanwhile the night and i carry on like lovers caught up in an endless dance a fine romance till sleep do us part

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Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 10/9/2010 5:32:00 PM

this was a very creative and wonderful piece to read, glad i had time to scroll over the features this week. congratulation, this is a great piece of art. --Madison

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2010 4:22:00 PM

Congratulations on homepage feature this week..Enjoyed reading your creative write..Sara

Thvia Shetley

Date: 10/7/2010 7:31:00 AM

congratulations on your well-deserved feature this week. Well done!

Daver Austin

Date: 10/5/2010 11:00:00 AM

I like the fantasia in this one, the wistful. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Bishnu Bhusal

Date: 10/4/2010 6:01:00 PM

really like the way you have depicted the brevity of life with strong images ...liked the way you interwined methaphysical elements with transitory earthy lives .. a strong sense of melancholy pervades all throughout the poem though with little remorses...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/4/2010 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Deb. Love, Carol

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/4/2010 3:41:00 AM

Till sleep do us part ... sigh they are some really wonderful end words congrates on being featured this week Deb I enjoyed this one smile ... love Jayne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/3/2010 9:11:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all with luv..

Amy Green

Date: 3/20/2010 7:10:00 PM

Wow, I feel like I just read a painting... great imagery.