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Sleepless Night

Sunless day deepening black Charcoal grey, no light shining Clouds rampant, darker, so cold Rolls in sleepless night Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/15/2012 5:28:00 PM

magnificent and I relate to this so well as many sleepless nights fr me especially when words want to escape onto paper Russell luv.. fine imagery compliments great work my friend ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2012 3:12:00 PM

I enjoyed seeing this one too, Russell. NIce nature descriptions you are doing these days.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2012 1:33:00 PM

It has been a gray day here also with some dampness and sprinkles not the candy kind..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence uplifted even though it is gray....Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/15/2012 11:37:00 AM

I tried another one would appreciate your feedback.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/15/2012 11:32:00 AM

Now that I have tried my hand at this style I have more of an appreciation for it. Well done, great pictures you have painted here.