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Sleepless

"You put a smile on my face & i thought, how appropriate... Good friends think of you EVEN WHEN they have no idea! :)" Music playing in the background Mind entertaining some beautiful fantasies Counting down the hours and smiling Warm jovial feelings flowing within The dawn of today will be worry-free Birds chatting in the background If only I could understand the exciting news they were sharing All I want to do is wear my dancing shoes and move

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/20/2015 8:23:00 AM

great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/9/2015 4:41:00 PM

Hey Funom i need to visit your pages and read your poems too. Thank u

Hannington Mumo

Date: 4/16/2015 12:26:00 AM

Yes, and so you wore your dancing shoes and moved? Njeri, this captures the spontaneity of the moment at hand...777777+++++....

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/9/2015 4:40:00 PM

Yes i wore them (in my head) and moved (in both my head and body). Dancing......a poem of another day. Thanx hannington

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/13/2015 10:27:00 AM

You go girl...dance away! Why not? Sending hugs. I won't be on soup for a while. Work related issues as well as personal ones. I'll pop in now and again when I can. Hugs

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/9/2015 4:35:00 PM

Thank u Eileen for the visit.